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教学生如何写诗

2012-04-26 22:16:15| 分类：教学 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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起承转合

起：缘起，为何而写；

承：承接，写景

转：转折，事情

何：抒发感情

然后定韵，

最后修改韵脚。

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暖暖四月春意浓，老师要我作诗工。

一湖碧水靠西北，两路交叉出阵中。

阴方大年随汉过，阳地端节显遗风。

虽居婆阳凄苦地，然当刻苦展豪雄。

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